He’s a teaser. He doesn’t care if you’re in public or not, he needs to touch you in some way. Whether it’s your hands, your hip, your thigh, or maybe even a little higher, he’s going to touch you.
That’s usually how he proposes he wants to pretty much fuck you, but be careful, he might get impatient and take you to the nearest restroom.
He prides himself in not begging when you don’t want to just down right submit to him or because you want to retaliate for him teasing you, so expect a fight for who teases the other more.
“Listen, (Y/N), if you want to play dirty, we can play dirty~”
But, if you just are too tired or don’t feel like doing it, he will let out a loud whine and probably ask if he can use your thighs or something, anything, because he really needs to touch you. (and this is where he starts getting a little whiny and ‘begs’ you to just let him touch you a little bit.
But if you finally give in, he will go to town, because, oh damn, if he isn’t about to smother you in attention.
BY THE WAY, HE LOVES GIVING ORAL, IT MEANS A LOT TO HIM WHEN YOU LET HIM JUST RANDOMLY GO DOWN ON YOU.
But if you go down on him. he’s gonna be in heaven, he just loves watching you. Your cheeks always get red and he just looks at you like your an angel sent from the Heavens.
As mentioned before, Gilbert it’s adventurous. If you’re willing, he will have sex with you wherever you can, even if it means its risky. Also, don’t worry about, you two have probably fucked on every surface in your apartment or in his house, it’s hard to tell…
And if you wanna explore kinks, then man, you’ve got the right person, he loves experimenting.
Ask me anything and I’ll tell you if it’s a turn on or turn off
go ahead bbys
Why the hell not? Everything else seems to be happening
Why not? I’m pretty bored right now trying to get my cacti and succulents potted. So this looks fun. (I’ll tag it as turn on/off meme if you wanna blacklist it.) Ask fandom related stuff can be asked too
Oooooooh anon. Alright, alright. Smut is my forte. This blog got ‘popular’ for it. And it’s probably going to be my legacy. My MA tutor told me that I’m one of the few people’s erotica he’s actually liked. ❤
So – enough posturing and here we go. This will obvs get NSFW.
Writing Smut – Fen’s 101
First thing I tackle(snrk), is –
Length (eyeyey)
Is this going to start in the middle of the build up, ie, are they already kissing and naked? Or is there going to be build up?
Going straight into the thick of things works for certain smut pieces, and it can change the pace of a piece of writing/mix things up a little if you start the chapter or piece with them already there.
Obviously for these types, you don’t have to worry about build up; about both partners essentially turning on – and in the case of m/m penetrative sex or m/f anal sex, you gotta put prep in there before A goes into B (but I’ll get there).
For build up pieces – I’ll reference my last fics ‘Voice’and ‘Language’– the build up between Illidan and Maiev was their back and forth in their birth tongue. It stirred up memories, and was something that was justtheirs. That, was their foreplay. Foreplay isn’t just touching or oral. It can be the thrill of battle, the whisper of a forgotten promise; the way they made you laugh – it’s unique to each character. And I think the important think with writing smut – for me anyway – is to approach it as not just a piece of porn with characters filling in the blanks. But create it from your characters – let them tell you what they want and how they want it.
Which takes me to the most important thing for me when I write smut –
Emotion
If it’s their first time or last; if it’s a 25 year married couple, midweek while the kids sleep; if it’s a one night stand with a faceless, nameless you’ll never see again; if it’s at last – there will always be some emotion. Something – whether it be bad, or good, will be there.
I try and portray this in several different ways.
For an intense, passionate tryst that has happened without warning, with very little build up – I try and reflect that in the urgency of my writing too. Shorter sentences. Repetition to mirror the wild, frantic, desperation of the moment. Also, for times like this I tend to focus on very physical things; the way their hands move, scratching against skin; how close they are; the heat of breath; the fact that for them, nothing else exists outside that moment and their bodies. Word choices can also be important for writing smut. I tend to use more ‘harsh’ words like ‘cock’ and ‘thrust’ for moments like this.
For times when the smut is more sensual – where there is so much love – I try and write (in short) as if the world is reflected on their partner; and their partner on the world. Now, this is a very generalised feeling for writing sensual/loving smut – and as I said before – always, always take into consideration the character’s personality and their relationship with their partner(s) first and foremost. Examples though for this type of smut. Partner A notices hows the moonlight falls over their shoulder, their back, making the thin stretchmarks shimmer like glass; as she breathed, it was as if the earth breathed with her, the leaves an echo of her voice, the faint whisper of a moan falling, falling away with the wind. I try and use a much more languid flow of sentences and softer words for this type of smut. Long sentences, lots of commas (hi everyone who has ever edited my work ever haha) and what one of my tutors called ‘expensive words’. Words that you can only use once in a piece; powerful words – often treading the lines of dreaded purple prose – but when used right, can really make a paragraph, a line, or even the piece itself.
Other important things for emotion: taste and smell. What does their partner taste like to them? What do they smell? Each other? Their hair? The bed of flowers they’ve just rolled onto, the puff of pollen, coiling in the air?
What do they hear? Sound can be a powerful turn on for people – especially the sounds of their partner; moans, whispers, words, names.
Fen! There’s more than just heat of the moment and sensual smut! You’re damn right there is and here’s a few more pointers for things I do for other types of smut. But I won’t go into too much depth, or I’ll be here forever.
Fun
Emphasis on body; playful touches and laughter. Dialogue! Don’t be afraid to put dialogue into your smut. People talk during sex – all types of sex.
Things can go wrong (and this isn’t restricted to fun sex). And how they react to it is purely down to the character’s personality and/or the relationship. But remember, happy couples can laugh together at this stuff.
Group Sex
Pronouns! This can get confusing if it’s say three girls together. The beauty with fanfic/fantasy stuff etc is we can say “The Demon Hunter” or “The mage” etc. and get away with it. In other fiction, a mixture of pronouns and their actual names. Try and stay away from “The tall one” “The red headed one” etc as much as possible.
Afterwards
Are they going to part straight away? Are they going to cuddle? Is the realisation of what they have just done, going to hit them?
Sex is a huge build up of emotion and a moment – and the release after can sometimes be a huge crash back to reality, that can hurt. Or that can be great. You don’t have to draw it out to the post-sex moment. In some of my fics I have ended with them falling onto the table/bed/floor, and then a single line of thought from one of the characters – or a single line of action, that can speak just enough. Don’t be afraid to let your reader figure it out themselves.
Orgasms!
Vagina havers can have multiple orgasms (and often not from penetration, but from clitoral stimulation). Sometimes the ones after the first are better; sometimes they’re not. Penis havers technically can, but not to the degree that the clit can give. And don’t forget prostate stimulation.
Also – the orgasm for people can affect them as individually as they are. Tremors, twitches, going perfectly still, silent, loud, laughing – know what your character does. And have some fun. Try and show their orgasm through their body; or the way things start to sound – different, muffled; their breathing is hitched, ragged; the world blurs, it fades away until all she can see, is her.
Other useful things of note when writing any smut
For m/m penetrative or any anal sex – proper lubrication. And also preparation. Especially if this is someone’s first time that way. They will need prepped with fingers/toy, lube and time. “It’s not sexy!” I hear you cry. Neither is a torn asshole which is what we all thinking.
Location. Is it a bed? A kitchen counter? A grimy toilet cubicle? Khadgar’s office? Make things show their union. A map on the table, tearing beneath them each time he thrusts; a book falling off a shelf when he collides against the wall; windows, fogging; the noise outside so loud, they can be loud.
Do your research when writing kinky stuff. I mean – it all depends on what Mood™ you’re going for, but for BDSM, aftercare is pretty damn important. Consent and understanding is essential.
Some of the best piece of advice I ever got for writing dialogue and writing in general is – make it realistic, not real.
catch of breath, choke, gulp, heave, inhale, pant, puff, snort, wheeze, huff, rasp, sharp intake of air, short of breath, struggle for breath, swallow, winded
I present to you a – probably quite incomplete, I’m sure I’m missing a lot of speech sounds – reference list and a bit of a guideline for the different ways one can describe the sounds your characters make whilst writing smut. I’ll definitely be referring to it, because I sometimes get stuck on exactly how to describe a particular noise. (aka, “he can’t groan again, he just groaned last paragraph”)
Combine a descriptor and a sound for best effect – for example, “needy moan,” “pleased hum,” or “sudden scream.” You can even use two: “low, rough grunt,” “sweet little cry,” “desperate, filthy noise,” as long as you don’t repeat a word that means the same thing, unless you really want to emphasize it. Avoiding repetition is pretty key here. You don’t usually want to say “hushed, quiet gasp” except on rare occasions when it’s very important how soft the sound was.
Use your own common sense, as well; some sounds and descriptors don’t generally work well together. “Deliberate shriek” probably wouldn’t work well, and neither would “languid grunt,” but again, this is all very situational – play around! Have fun.
Feel free to add to my lists, use for your reference or pass them around. It would be fun to see a randomized generator made, too, I’m just too lazy to do it myself. 😉